Soulkana

Thanks for the reviews you guys^^ hope I managed to fix some parts of it. I will try to fix it more when I have the time ^^ Good luck ...

Chapter 1 Family you should indent each paragraph “It is with great pleasure that I present to you for the very first time , Mr And Mrs. Ted Dixon,” beamed ...

Its still amazing sister. Hopefully you write chapter 2 soon so I may read XD. Good luck and Happy Writing!!!!! Soulkana

Thanks ^^ it took forever LOLS worked on it all day yesterday and still took me till 11 at night to have it upload >< way too long

You sit outside, with a clipboard in your arms, resting atop your knees. You are staring at a blank page of paper- there is nothing more terrifying- with a pen ...

Hahaha thanks for the review big brother ^^ glad you like it!!!!

Chapter 3: The Letters She kept an eye on the clock. Twenty minutes before they had to arrive, she shook Alexis awake, telling her it was time to go. Alexis ...

Awesome Chapter Truly LOVED IT. I have a few corrections but thats it. "That is should." It should be it. That was all I could find. ^^ I really loved ...

Amazing absolutely AMAZING!!!! I truly loved it and so can't wait for more to read!!! I really hope to read more when I have the time. Good luck and Happy ...

Haha sorry had to read it again XD was needing some inspiration and I really hope you will be adding more to this ^^ Well until you see me again!!! ...

Some day I wil, it should be will have, the power, what I see you with. Some day I will have, the smile, what is always on your face. Some ...

Funny you should mention OLD MAN AND THE SEA i just finished reading that for english class yesterday....didn't like it cause I lost my spot to much that I actually ...

I want to know if you meant it I've thought about it Countless times Looked at it all the time; still do sometimes truth is I've thought of a couple ...

Life is Beautiful Open your eyes Can you see the animals running? Can you see the stars shining? Open your eyes Can you see that life is beautiful Can you ...

Thanks i wrote it out of nowhere in Biology hahaha. Good luck and Happy Writing!!!!!!! Soulkana