Sowhat

This is probably the best poem I have read on this sight so far! I really like this poem. It has very good description. You should make a story like ...

Thanks, I will try hard in my next few chapters and fix some errors

kThis is a very good chapter 2. You also did a very good job at taking somebody's advice. Firerift24 right.

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This is a really good story. Maybe you should try to add some more details to make the story more meaty, other than that,its perfect!

This is a really good story. Maybe you should try to add some more details to make the story more meaty, other than that,its perfect!