SpectraValentine

Wow. I totally loved your work. Its simple yet brings out the plot easily. The emotions are conveyed clearly. I could feel love out of it...... Keep up your good ...

Its a nice piece of work. The idea is a good one. But I would say, it lacks the essence. Like I mean the character is not clearly sorted out. ...

is this any kind of code ? ;-D

Good work. but it lacks some connections between emotions that you need to take care of next time.

A mind blowing work. You really have got the talent in you. I like way you created and framed each lines. Keep up your good work.

Oww.... this is so sweet. so heart touching. You have done a nice job, though there are few corrections to be made like.. "catches the falls "......"hug by gentle hug"

Your writing style is good, but there are few mistakes you need to notice like few spelling mistakes & few grammer corrections.

Nice. you have brought out the emotions.

I do appreciate your efforts.... but i guess you need to put on some improvements

Amazing writing.... you are really good

ohh... couldnt catch at last though.... still good work :)

Splendid work.. keep up :)

Wow... nice piece of work