SpiritedWolfe

Thank you very much for your review! ^^ So, technically I was going for an AI that became sentient last minute, but I think with your interpretation, the piece still ...

Thank you very much for your comments ^^ I really appreciate you reading it!

That might be poor wording. I meant it more like, "oh yeah of course haha great."

The part where Grey said "Show some respect" was actually to Eric xD That's why the Leader was like, "Yo, chill." I was hoping that the reader would catch on ...

This guy is their captive, but he seems okay with it, somehow. "Okay with it" may not be the right word xD It's more a "he knows what they can ...

Just saying. I'm crying right now xD

So, with the Leader. When he talks, the mouth on his mask actually does move. Is there a way I could better clarify it? Oh and Splinter is very far ...

Thank you for the review! I think what made the agents part confusing was that I rewrote it from being just two to six in total. And thank you so ...

So, I read a part of this in my creative writing class and some other people also thought in the beginning that Hunter and Grey are both against Splinter. If ...

Thanks for the review! (As for the first sentence, hood is the right word xD They wear black hoods /under/ their masks. But the conflicting vibe might be a problem ...

Like I mentioned in the A/N this isn't the end of the chapter. There are still two other parts to it, so the last line wasn't meant to summarize anything. ...

Well... I don't remember this in the last draft xD I AM EXCITE. [No review today, I'm afraid D: Maybe some time in the future I'll go back and spill ...

OH MY GOD HE ASKED TO KISS HER. THAT'S SO ADORABLE. ^ I legit almost cried of happiness when that happened. I love it xD

Your writing speed is fantastic too xD Astonishing really. How do you do it?

Hey! This isn't a review since I don't have any real critique, but I wanted to let you know what I've been thinking so far ^^ When you posted the ...