Spitfire

I have to admit, I had a lot of problems with this chapter, hence why it took me soooo long to post it. I still have a lot of parts ...

Borntobeawriter, my sis, told me all about, and after a while suggested I join. So I did :)

Normally I'd give you a really long and detailed review. But since I already have...there's nothing for me to do XD The few things I do remember that I'd mentioned ...

Hey there!! Spitfire here to review! I didn't find any nit-picks, so I'll skip that and go straight for the main things. First off; your characters seem wayyyy too perfect. ...

Hey Rissa! I noticed you only have 1 comment, so although I haven't read your first chapter, I'll go ahead and review by what I see :) Here I go! ...

Hey Skinsy! I just saw your "status" and thought I'd take a peek :) Here we go! So I actually don't have any nit-picks. Rather rare and pretty cool :D ...

Hey Beginningtowrite, Spitfire here to review!! "What?" I snapped at her, angry that she'd disrupted me Not sure I'd say "disrupted me" as it was the trance Jemma disrupted, not ...

All right, so I've decided to not be so lazy and read the prologue despite the fact that I just read chapter one.. XD Here I go! I'm afraid I ...

Hey bro/sis-in-law! Long time no talk! :) Just noted you posted this, I haven't read the prologue, but I think it'll still be okay to on I go! All right, ...

Icy, if you want, you can write me a message on my wall when you post; you don't have to always post in my review forum, lol, I don't mind ...

Hey brassnbriddle! :) Just here to tell you that I am going to read your first three chapters, just not right now. I was going to do it today as ...

Oh wow, it does look like a long chapter, well, longer than your average ones anyway ;) Movin' on! They’d lost the only leverage to make Kieran to do exactly ...

Finally finished it Cthulhu ;)

Oh my god! I'm so so sorry it took me so long to review this. I'd started to review your story but wasn't able to finish it and then forgot ...

Hey again! I know you didn't ask, but I thought I'd review chappy #2 ;) I have to tell you though, I noticed that you posted your first and second ...