Spitfire

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Ha ha. My magnifying glass is always at your disposal :D WritingSpitfire wrote: I nothing would, because it was gone. Destroyed. As for that, it was actually supposed to be ...

Duh!

Ha ha. I knew you would say something about the pink bubble. As for Tony & Crys, and Crys not being in school, that's in upcoming chapters. Oh, and I'll ...

Nah, I think I preferred the last one, just the fact that the whole parent's part was intriguing and all. This one wasn't bad, but I was expecting the guys ...

Thanks for the comments guys.....well girls :lol:

HEY! Part of the story , not me! And I'll have you know I learned how to walk in heels for my prom! -_- And yeah, like Tanya said, that ...

Also for me, I don't mind when people PM me. Especially when it's a story I've commented on a couple times, I like to be kept posted. So count me ...

Love it!!! That's all I have to say since I've read it before :lol: xxxxxxxxxxx

Actually that does help some, because, by reading along I got all that, but if you know right from the start, then you don't have to guess it or rack ...

Not much else to say except that it's a really good story!

Hey everyone! Thanks so much for all the comments! I know it doesn't make sense now, but if you read the next chapter, it explains that he's not Japanese, he's ...

Tanya: Oye. Forgot to mention it. And I hadn't not noticed they had that in common, I just hadn't planned it originally. Treehugger: I'll try adding a bit more desciption ...

Okay, so here I am to review the edited version. I just noticed a few things... Millie stood there and gaped. He had never asked her that before ? Why ...

Jut like rename the titles, like do your chapter 1-2-3-4-5 in order, and then for the ones where the MC is Alice, just add (different version) or something like that ...