SporkPunk

Hello there, EdgarAllan! Okay, first thing's first. Grammar. There were quite a few errors I caught. Most of these are simple to fix; I suggest proofreading, such as reading the ...

I'm completely movie obsessed. :] Here's an off-the-top-of-my-head list: Donnie Darko--quite possibly my favorite movie. Ever. And that cover of Mad World is heartbreaking. A Clockwork Orange The Rock

W-Waterfalls :D

This is...the SporkPunk! :D and this is with less pale. xD My sister took this with a webcam, so the quality is...not brilliant.

Hi! Can you review my work? It's called Oxygen Thief and it's in Science Fiction Short Stories. This is the first work I've posted to YWS. :D The link is ...

He lay on the hill, hands tucked behind his head. The soft blades of grass tickled the back of his neck. He looked skyward, dreamily watching the blue-grey clouds skulk ...

Hi Greed! So I'm SporkPunk, and I'm new here too. Hey, you're a senior now like me! Yay class of 2011! Welcome to YWS, and from one newbie to another, ...

Thank you all for the welcome! :] What kind of video games do you like, Lydia? I usually play games like pokemon, rock band, guitar hero, final fantasy, god of ...

I really like the use of second person/future tense. Wonderfully unique. At least, I haven't read anything like this before. As for anything grammar related, I can't find anything blatantly ...

Hi peanut! This is my first review, I hope it goes well. :) I agree with beckiw on the consistency. The woulda/would have transition threw me off just a bit, ...

Hi everyone! So, I'm new here. I've lurked here once, and I have to say everyone here is an amazing writer. I finally decided to make an account here as ...