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Re: The Kirja (Chapter One)
For the burning the soul bit, that is definitely an improvement. :D And, just a word of advice. Rushing anything in a literary piece isn't the best idea. xD Revealing ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: The Eye
@l5na2: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked the bit with the concert. I worked fairly hard on getting the description down because it has future significance. And the ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Bluelight: Chapter 1
Thanks everyone for the reviews! :D I appreciate it quite a lot. And I agree with pretty much everything you guys have suggested. :) I'll be editing this as soon ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: In Defense of Our Nation (Working Title) Scene 3
Yeah, in the army, NCO's are referred to by rank, or "Sergeant" if the were SGT, SFC, 1SG, MSG. Or so I was told. xD At least, that's how it ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Bluelight (formerly known as The Robot...Human Hair)
I made some edits, added a bit more description. :D
Jun 29, 2010