Squirtlepowiee

Thanks for the reviewww :D

Ohhh! Thanks for clearing that up! And yes, pokemon fan xD

Oh, yes!!

Niiiiiiiiiceee! I love how RBCs stand for red blood cells (I think? :3) Very deep!

Ty for de revieeeww!

Thanks for the review! Yea, I saw a 3 sentence story online and decided to make it longer. I will get to editing when I have the time!

I'm sorry, ill come back to review!!

Oh Im sorry D: wrong copy paste

Oh sorry, why is there 2

Hey, Squirtlepowiee here! Nice story! Most stories I read are in 3rd person, so to be reading on ein 1st is an interesting experience. I don’t have much to review. ...

Thanks for the tips! I didn't really get what you meant in numbers 1 and 5 so can you get back to me on those? TY!

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DUN DUN DUN :D

Thanks for reviewing! Yas, I'm 13...I miss 12...I reread the story again, but I cannot find any grammar mistakes. Can you please point them out for me? Thank youuuu!!!

Wow, this poem portrays a very strong and clean message. You might not live in America, but when I saw this, I immediately thought, "Trump" xD Nothing bad, but this ...