Staggy11

Wow. The hardest decision that I have to make is which to comment on first. Both parts are superb, truly superb. I love the imagery of the first section, especially ...

Oh very nice. Very nice indeed. The last little twist at the end, the flowing style, all of it well crafted. " though rancid was probably a more fitting adjective" ...

I have never been a fan of first-person narrative, for the simple reason that it seems far too similar to someone giving an idea for a tale, rather than the ...