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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Law of the Street [R for language]

    Hey there, I'll be giving this a full critique when I'm less shattered, but for now you'll just have to make do with a few preliminary comments/questions: 1. Out of ...

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Night is Early Yet

    Hey there -- my comments are in bold . The Night is Early Yet Listless in her early death, the painted face has colour yet with green bouquets and purple ...

    Apr 5, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Ordinary

    This is a lovely idea, and you've pulled it off well -- as a result I have hardly any comments to make, but take note anyway: Lets press ourlipstogether and ...

    Apr 4, 2010


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