Stefan

Thanks for looking through it for me, much harder to spot mistakes that I've made cos I see what I want to see not whats there. Evan’s curled ear. His ...

sweet. I love this line most of all cos I can relate, "How can one simple upper turning of the lips completely disarm me?". Smiles!

However, your Photoshop(?) skills are pretty good, assuming you created the images you used for your covers. Free stock images, yes. :p

Can i just say, the story doesn't really make much sense until I finish it, its not supposed to be about the gore or violence, more about the effect of ...

your insane . People dont post stuff like this , and thats why i cant help think your a bit bold . The acctual quality was , eh... it was ...

Really, good. Might have to steal some of your writing techniques >:) I Love the sixth paragraph and the description of Kotani... SWELL!