Stephene

The poetry was intense and i have to say that even i was lost somewhere in the level of vocabulary used. Some points didn't make any sense like, "Staking out ...

Truly amazing piece of work, i must say you were able to make the environment for your characters such that i could feel as if i am there! i think ...

Over all i think it was a very good poem as you were almost successful in trying to write what you were trying to write, though i personally thought that ...

Amazing , the painting and the fact that you keep it on your wall i wish i was allowed to do that :( work harder you can become much more ...

i seriously laughed when i read this because i think it was personal experience that you wrote (no offence in anyway) i think your a good writer for your age ...

omg!! i am seriously shocked!! for a sixth grader you were amazing :O and i don't think i can give any tips because i think you are a much better ...

Hey retrodisc i too am new to this place so i am not that good at it still i feel like giving it a try too like royal seal pointed ...

Wonderful story, i don't know about there other readers but i truly loved it. apart minor spellings mistakes like cigarettes and buses and some apostrophes like I'm instead of im ...