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Stephene

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Snow Flakes

    nice little Christmas poem, and neat rhymes although i thought flutter and cluster were weird but that's just me keep up the good work Yours truly - Stephene

    Dec 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: As yet forgotten

    A short and neat story. I loved the rhymes and job well done keep up the good work. Yours truly - Stepene

    Dec 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Treasure Passed

    really creative, but you can polish it and elaborate it now it would be much better according to me. Hope i helped Yours Truly - Stephene

    Dec 2, 2010


“Rise like Lions after slumber In unvanquishable number. Shake your chains to earth like dew Which in sleep had fallen on you— Ye are many—they are few.”
— Mary Shelly