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Thanks, for reading.

Thanks for letting me know what you think.

I also am planning to create a story out of this.

No need for apologies shadowbound. Thanks for the constructive criticism. And I will keep your advice in mind. Thanks for reading my work!

I really like it! Spiritual poetry is my favorite type of poetry is my favorite type. I will be happy to look at your other work. Which I'm about to ...

Want to read more! :). I love how you are tying the french in. If you come add more and you decide to post it. I'll read it. The funny ...

I like the fact when i read this it just takes me in. It's like I'm there on the sidelines whatching this play out. Shoot, i would really love if ...

I like it. If you are going to write more on this please let me now, because i would read this. I do think there should be a major twist ...

I love this! I think because I'm a hopless romantic :) . I love your choice to use greek mythology , and you now how to use those big dictionary ...