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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Goodbye

    Hello there wisemann210, I am sick so I'm sorry if this isn't as good of a review as you'd like. I found this poem really moving it seems like a ...

    Oct 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Goodbye Daddy

    Thank you for the great reviews I have looked over it and I'm not particularly too proud of it myself. I'm a perfectionist so I always end up hating my ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: One Escape

    Wow thanks for the great advice, I'll definitely work on that. I'll be sure to make it longer when i edit it just for you lordgluzman :D I'm so happy ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Werewolf's Bite

    Oh my goodness!!! This is amazing you must keep working on it, I am so in love with it already. It's so original and out of the ordinary, so much ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: The music

    Hello there StarDuster, I'd like to say well done on this piece, it speaks to me. I love how you describe it, every sense detailed. I love music and found ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Stories of the Wind

    Good day to you Oreorulez21401, I'm happy to say I enjoyed your poem. It was short yet so deep, I think of this subject all the time. I, myself am ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My sweetheart

    This was really cute :D All I can say is, Those gorgeous qualities that's how you spell gorgeous ;] Cutious and simple Don't know what word you were trying to ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]

    Oh man I wasn't even paying attention thanks for correcting.

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: I Will Follow You Into The Dark

    Good day Embroswyn15, There were some mistakes but, most of them have been corrected so I'll just say I really enjoyed this. Though i think of Renesmee way differently then ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Keeping the Dead Company

    Good day AnAbstractHeart, I really enjoyed this but there are some things you may need to edit. corrections/suggestions in bold Oh darling, darling, It seems you found me out! --add ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]

    Heres another of me from recently pocket knifes are really cool and fun to mess with :]

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Breed 2

    Anyone mind if I come in late? If so I'm sorry... I just need somebody to get me into the story somehow. Name:Jocelyn Marie Rein Race: vampire Age:looks around 20 ...

    Oct 6, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Tightrope Walking

    Good day to you Eimear, I really enjoyed your poem, it's so original and shows a point of view rarely thought of. I can understand the tightrope walker's feelings of ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Dwindling Fire [New: A picture depicting the climax]

    Oh my. This has truly amazed me, The plot...everything. You didn't tell me too much or too little of the beasts, I imagined those terrible beings. I find myself in ...

    Oct 4, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Frozen lakes and sugar cakes

    Good day xGraceex, I found this poem really heartwarming, it reminded me of being smaller. But i never wore makeup and probably never will haha. I'm Oh-natural :lol:. I'm actually ...

    Oct 4, 2008


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