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Good day CoolCatElly, I must agree with everyone else poetry is a must for being able to describe itself. When i first read it i was really lost and didn't ...

Ella Ella was still looking at the stars when Tim said something. "How did you find this place?" He asked sounding sleepy. She sat up and gazed at where he ...

I took everyone's suggestions and i think it's at least a little bit better. Tear streams flowed, drip by drip. Clear liquid defied the deep maroon. With every scream, she ...

I find this spectacularly emotional and deep, it definitely makes people think. I noticed some wrong tense usage but, I'm not one to base writing on that kind of stuff. ...

Ella and Tim are still outside they just became boyfriend and girlfriend caleb is sitting next to juliet trying to get into the story and you and kelly have been ...

Ella I'm from Bremerton here in Washington, it was my favorite place...i miss it a lot..." She explained sadly. "Well...mountain lions, i know weird right?"She answered his question after his ...

[I'm just giving a guess i believe juliet is helping you get in to the story ^^ your welcome to add envy into this i'm sure the drama would make ...

Ella Tim had just wrapped a part of his shirt around her bite, she was shocked. "Never hurt yourself again." He told her looking dead in the eye. Her mind ...

Oh i understand :] Ella is a determined person though ;] haha oh and where has Rory legend been she like disappeared ;O Well any who i really like this ...

Ella "Tim." He muttered deep in his thoughts. She tried to think if she should tell him her name or wait, he seemed like he needed to say something. After ...

I know I'm double posting but, please give me a review :( I love creative criticism please help me make it better.

Ooh I'm sorry RoryLegend, it's okay if Caleb likes Ella but, she likes Tim just telling you ;) Ella She couldn't control her emotions, love kept taking over steering her ...

-Ella "Ooh hope i didn't hurt you too bad." Ella said after she scratched the guy who had just bumped into her and winked. She'd had emo friends before, this ...

Hah thank you : D --mackenzie

Weird :/ here's a url if that's better...