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  • Poetry » Humor, Fantasy Re: De Frog Wizard

    Wow, I thought the other one was nonsense! This is amazingly nonsensical! So many new words I am overwhelmed! It's beautiful! I feel so mooshy all of a sudden! That ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Lyrics » Humor, General Re: My Name Is Polly

    This is what I call a nonsense poem. Total nonsense, but quite amusing, a good children's poem. However I'm not sure if kerfuffle is a word. . . . not ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: A Risk Worth Taking

    You could of course argue that it was a waste of life. The Germans in the world wars were human, you must remember that, not all of them were bad ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Three Vengeful Dwarves

    Nice nice nice! I enjoyed! For some reason I went looking for something of yours to review when in need! Two wrong don't make a right, but really, there are ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Love chapter 4

    I never knew you were quite so good at writing! This was frankly, quite good! I enjoyed it, it read easily! I would say that it isn't original, but for ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: That Boy: Part 3

    Ohkay! Good work here, sadly it isn't original and I read stories like this all the time, but it was well written and interesting (That counts for a lot!) Grammar: ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 2

    Okay this was great! I really enjoyed it, t'was enthralling. However I'm beginning to think it might be more appropriate to give this story the categories of "Fantasy Romance" from ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Nation Grows Large and Still Collapses

    Okay, interesting poem here! It was well written, and had a lot of really good words, nice powerful words. Dying, vacant, blood, sorrows, pickled corpses . . . but it ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Ch 3 - The City of Lonka

    Hmmm, okay, great work! Huzzah, double thumbs up! Whatever you need! I really enjoyed this, it was well written and well paced, and most importantly it was original! And to ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1

    Okay so this was very well written, nice job! Personally I've never been to a funeral, but I know how it is to lose a parent (Father in my case ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: Introduction

    Okay, great work here. I've read a number of stories like this one, and they're really actually quite good in my opinion, however be careful. You can get logic holes ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Culture, Supernatural Re: Plight of a Widow

    Okay, this portrayed the regret of suicide very well. When peoples lives fall apart and they plan to commit suicide they A: Jump off the bridge and find on the ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Robot Colony

    Interesting. . . . BWAHAHAHAHAHAH This is crazy, but I can see where you're coming from. Personally I don't use iPhones, iPods, computers and the like much, so I am ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Abyss of Madness

    Wow, this was amazing, your word choice was beautiful, filled with emotion, each one dealing a punch! I wish I could write like this! It's a real struggle for me ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Lights: Chapter One *Edited and Revised*

    Okay, so first off, this is one VERY weird world, and that is one very weird fourteen year old. A world were 14 year old's can go to war? Okay, ...

    Mar 31, 2013


If you don't know it's impossible it's easier to do. And because nobody's done it before, they haven't made up rules to stop anyone doing that again, yet.
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