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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Earthly Angels - Bookstore/Dream scene.

    It seems you're in need of a review. “Bookends”. It's usually ok to put the period inside the quotation marks- thus, "Bookends." He was at the cash register, ringing someone ...

    Mar 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey, just joined! :D

    Hello there. I hope you don't like to be called 'Evil'? Anywise, here's a little recommendation. See if you can find a book called Song of the Gargoyle.

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi, I'm a newbie!

    Hello Logan! As it happens, I was born in North Carolina. You'll find that most everyone's friendly around here. Don't hesitate to ask questions. Also, we have a chat room ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Novels Re: For the Better Chapter One

    I see you've fallen prey to the No-Setting Bug. Adding a few details about New York- like whether the chapter is set in New York City or in the country- ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Research Re: Parchment

    My question is, what are some of the materials that were used before paper was invented?

    Feb 24, 2011
  • Archive Re: League of Shapeshifters (LOSS)

    In a little town of no consequence, teenagers are discovering the ability to change into animals. Now their mission is to find a cure for a friend. This storybook will ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: At Dark Forest Gates

    Ancient, mist-shrouded timbers faded into view. Veil Sixclaw squared his shoulders. The fatal wound faded to a dull ache as he neared Dark Forest's gates. "No one to meet me- ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Touch- Home

    The Burks' cat is trying hard to convey a thought: Pet me. His green eyes plead silently; his tail waves lazily. I laugh and scratch behind his black ear. "Are ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Two Shorter Stories

    Tsk. Do you not know that 'travellers' is perfectly acceptable British?

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: An Alternate Ending to Frankenstein

    I'm not sure whether you noticed, but you say the boy lost one sneaker. Did they wear sneakers in Frankenstein's day?

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: How to Introduce your Protagonist

    One method is to begin in the middle of the story. Then the conflict and protagonist are introduced both at once.

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Longer paragraphs

    I have a problem with this. How do you flesh out paragraphs so they don't all end up being one to three sentences?

    Feb 14, 2011
  • Other Re: Dear People...

    Fiction, that was brilliant. And angel I had never even met before An angel; I'm sure this was just a typo. to chang someone's life. Change. Thus ends my spelling ...

    Feb 14, 2011
  • Research Re: Does this work?

    Thank you; that was most insightful.

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Why yes, I am new :D

    So you're a Christian, Savannah? We have a 'Christian Writers' group here; feel free to investigate. 'Round here we're very informal. There aren't any strict rules about where to post ...

    Feb 12, 2011


The good ended happily, and the bad unhappily. That is what Fiction means.
— Oscar Wilde, The Importance of Being Earnest