StoryWeaver13

Hey magpie! Okay, so you have some really amazing sensory images going on here - the silhouette against twinkling lights, a crack of bones - all with an eerie but ...

Hey, so I was casually stalking and decided to take a peak at some of your poetry, remembering that you'd been one of the better poets on this site. This ...

Ahaha! Oh, my God...erm, Unicorn. This was so funny, and surprisingly intelligent; I think it posed a bit of satire towards both sides (theists for ignorance, atheists for shunning and ...

Hey, Persy! Well I don't think that this is my favorite poem of yours, but it is, without a doubt, still very well-written. You have a style that does well ...

Hey 567ajt! Alright, so I'm no expert on lyrics, but I shall sincerely try to muster up a constructive review. I think that you have some really good lines here ...

Hey there, Bookworm! I'll do what I can to review, and if you have any questions, feel free to ask. :] Corrections will be in brackets. "It was exceptionally hot ...

Hey! Okay, so I'll go stanza-by-stanza and then summarize. Cool? Cool. "The glass is half full- I see it half empty, not full. But I say it is half full." ...

Hey there Nether! Well I'm a pretty picky person when it comes to poetry, so I'll forewarn that I may be a bit of a critic. You don't maintain your ...

Good tidings, and a very merry Christmas from your secret Santa! (ie, me) :D Wow, this is a good opening! There's a lot of promise behind this. I can already ...

Hey EnchantedPanda! This was a nice poem; it has lovely wording and the imagery is beautiful. The idea of "pale purple gauze" lapping at the shore is appealing in every ...

Hey there, Journalist! Okay, so I'm a harsh critic of poetry, so if I come off as being picky, it's nothing personal. This poem is very straightforward, and while that ...

Sometimes I try to review your poems but find that I just want to read the best lines over and over again, the same way I guiltily glimpse at old ...

Hey there, Rebel! Well I have to say, I've never been a huge haiku person, but this was very well-done. I think that haikus have a tendency to show off ...

Hey therealme! I'm a little rusty, but shall give this review a shot, okay? First and foremost, I applaud you for writing a pretty decent free-verse poem....which is easier said ...

He there hockeyfan. Well, I like the last line's little bitter tone there, and the irony of it, but I think that for the most part this poem is in ...