Storybraniac

Hi! Welcome to yws! I realized this is your first work. The main idea of the story may be a bit cliched, and to some extent, controversial, but it's a ...

Hey there! Stor here for a review. I have to admit. This was me of the best horror stories I've ever read. From the time the woman led them down ...

Hey there! Awesome story. I really liked the way you portrayed Jackson, a boy who has been locked up for ages. But I was kind of confused. Why actually was ...

Hey there! Storybraniac here to review. I think that this story has a few mistakes, which I would like to clear up. But it's okay since this is your first ...

Hey there! Stor here to review on this (mini) review day. This is a really great 'other' piece. The monster reminds me of Cookie Monster! Ha ha. Old memories. I ...

Hey there! Stor here to review. I really liked the way you are describing that personality is more important than looks. This reminds me of the book series 'NERDS' which ...

Hey there! Stor here to review. Hah! I almost thought that the 'him' was a boy. This was really funny, although I thought it was something romantic at the beginning. ...

Hey there! Stor here to review. I really loved the way you described your poem. I don't think I have any nitpicks, but I do have one. But it's not ...

Hey there! Stor here to review for Royal Navy. Okay, so this was a really good poem. But you forgot about grammar like the capital letters at the beginning of ...

Hey there! Storybraniac here to review. This is a really great poem and I believe that it's okay if the lines are not long. I totally disagree with Laure. My ...

Hey there! Stor here to review. I really liked this lyric/parody of yours. I really like the song and this is kind of funny. Though, I didn't understand why it's ...

Hey there retrodisco666! Storybraniac here to review. I gotta admit, this is a really good poem. I haven't seen a lot of poems about "father - son" relationship, but this ...

Hey there! Storybraniac here to review on this wonderful review day. I really liked the way you put Maasai history in a short story. I don't really know much about ...

Hey there! Storybraniac here to review for Mazarine Marauders. This is a really good poem. I loved the part "There is a silence in my mind, That keeps me in ...

Hey there! Stor here to review. I really liked this poem, well, loved it!!! But the third stanza didn't sound that good. I think the third and fourth line are ...