Streamer

Good work Two scenes unfold before us gathered here, Two men shuffling forward on tired quests, Two lives which were marred by a fateful fear, Two people out to do ...

For all the talk I read about punctuation and grammar on this forum, I feel like this one might be overly-punctuated. Not in a technical sense, but in a reading ...

Yeah. While the points above are valid, I think its an excellent effort. On websites like this age often seems to go out the window and a 10 year old ...

I can really relate to your first one. Some of my poems are about that locked down feeling. When all you seem to be able to do is hope, wish ...

I really like the imagery in this poem. If you let yourself connect with the words you can almost feel yourself being carried off into the sky. I myself enjoy ...