Stripelife1

Thanks for reviewing my poems. the humand was just a typo. Some of this stuff is supposed to be confusing because its the bible and the bible is confusing. anyway, ...

Thanks for the review! I will really consider those suggestions.

I really liked this. I can totally relate to what you are saying, and you make your point pretty clear. Great Job!

thank you for the suggestions. some of the things that you pointed out where just typos that i will fix, and i will try and work on the other things, ...

thanks. When I grow up i want to write novels, novellas, poems, short stories, songs, music, and everything else that i can. And my final goal is the eventually win ...

Thanks for the review. It really helps.

thanks! That is a real inspiration that there are people other than family members and friends that would like my poems!

Only, the format was kinda meant to be like that.

Thanks for the comment. i is a real encourager and thanks for telling me about my typo. I will change that. But the thing with the format is that i ...

Thanks for the suggestions.

I really liked this poem. It held real meaning, and I could feel thatu felt very strongly about the subject. That is one of the most important things in writing. ...

I will start out saying ur poem is very good. At the beginning it sets a dark and mysterious tone. It is a meaningful poem with what you believe on ...

That was amazing. It gets the point across, while keeping the reader intrested with a mystery, and by the time the mystery is solved, the reader is hooked and can't ...

I can say that this was a beautiful poem. I couldn't take my eyes off it, espesially the last 4 lines or so where extreamly good. I am a poet ...

i kinda like both of those ideas so i will change them as soon as i can!