StuckOnEarth

Hiya! Space here for a...sorta review. Wow. I was completely sucked into this story--the description and imagery is amazing, the dark twists and turns are captivating. This really was a ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! (This was meant to be posted earlier, but unfortunately I was busy so I had to save half of it as a draft.) Once ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! I really like the style of the poem--how most lines aren't even two words, making it short, but each word means something different and ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! I got a lot of different vibes from this poem. You/the protagonist seemed to be talking about some mysterious group of people ("they look ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! This topic is something that is not very popular in the writing community, but is a very cruel reality happening everywhere around the world. ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! The mix of humor and dark imagery was absolutely perfect. I must say, the last line ("Especially if cocoa is involved") was definitely my ...

Hiya! Space here for a review. To be completely honest, I'm glad your back. Your post on Depression scared me and I was worried when you didn't reply. Now, onto ...

Hiya Fluma! Space here for a review. (Thanks for tagging me!) Wow...this is amazing! I love how you bolded certain words in each stanza, and made other words italic. It ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! Wow, even though this poem was short and very straight-forward, the message it sent about you and the best friend was very strong. You ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! Despite how short it was, I still found it enjoyable. Something I find odd was that usually poems like this about nature always seem ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! I must agree with the last reviewer, this poem gives off a very calming vibe, probably because the use of words like "balmy lips", ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! All I can say is that this is absolutely amazing! I didn't know what to expect, but this was perfect. I really don't have ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! I really enjoyed this poem! It was very sweet and flowed smoothly, with a clear meaning to it. I loved all the metaphors and ...

Hiya! Space here for a review. Reading stuff like this is AMAZING, because the vocabulary is so carefully picked and placed, and the imagery is so satisfying and vivid. You ...

Hiya! Space here for a review! This was really interesting! I love the taunting, angry personality Mr. Last Day had, as if he had a personal anger burning for Life, ...