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  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Unexpressed feelings.

    Hello, there. It seems to me like this work is very personal to the author, which is fine, but it does show some problems grammatically and content-wise. I'll try to ...

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Other, Realistic Re: Waiting On the World to Change

    As this is an incredibly short work, I think it might warrant a shorter review than normal that mostly circles around your question. Personally, if I were stuck in this ...

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Realistic Re: Breaking News-The Monolith

    Another day, another cataclysmic end-of-the-world situation involving aliens. What a time to be a science fiction/disaster author! This certainly had its unique colors when it comes to its form, thoug

    Jun 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The truth about hell

    I understand that you've never written in English before, and it does show in the text. I won't sugarcoat it--you change your tenses like Katy Perry changes clothes, and it ...

    Jun 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 3]

    THIS IS WAY OVERDUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE which is why I am reviewing it now, after finally finishing your first three parts (ask me if you want me to review those too--I have ...

    Jun 6, 2016
  • Other » General, General Re: A Letter to Emotions

    Hey, God. It's me, Satan. I did like how you seemed to be pouring your heart over this work, but there were some things I wanted to talk about with ...

    Jun 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Case of Schadel Kueper: Chapter 2

    Hello again, Magestorrow. It's Ellstar from Exams Hell, who's decided that he feels more comfortable reviewing another chapter of Schadel Kuiper than write an essay on creationism. Now, without dilly-

    May 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Purgatory

    Hey, Cody! (Coday? Codaayyyyyy? I'm tempted to call you Bob, I call nearly everybody Bob nowadays. But Coday it is.) You may or may not know this, but I'm a ...

    May 18, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i

    Personally, I'm not a big fan of people submitting images in their works. If the work was any good, they wouldn't need to rely on a picture to describe their ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Death

    Hello, Lightsong! I read this in the Writers Tournament, as you already know, and I stand by what I said about not quite liking the rape aspect of it. I ...

    May 16, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cuz...'not you' ( Experimental poetry 1.1)

    Hey there Taha! You've asked me to review this, so I thought it was only fair that I did. Overall, this is an interesting poem--I can't say the style is ...

    May 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Case of Schadel Kueper: Chapter 1

    *ahem* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *ahem* I'm obligated to do that until next week in light of current ev

    May 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Jim: Chapter 4

    You didn't report to me about this new chapter coming out. Or at least, I didn't know it was out until I saw a review for it. Well, now's the ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Seventh Crown III

    Alright. Since we've talked about it, I've already warned you about my ignorance towards how the author feels--I'll try to deliver my points politely, but inevitably they will carry my ...

    May 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Seventh Crown II

    You know the story of Siddharta Gautama? Honestly, I think that's a great story, despite usually being heard like a word of mouth anecdote. It doesn't tell the reader how ...

    May 6, 2016


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