Sunshine

I would NEVER have enough patience to write a novel like this. I finally get the name to!!! YOU ROCK!

Yeah so I know this has been out for a bit but i see new chapters come out once in awhile so I finally decided to check it out! I ...

Interesting piece. Please add like a little charecter script at the beggining. I think that would be very helpful. also a bit more realistic. ( As in if people were ...

( This is a random little story I thought of! :D I couldn't think of a good beggining so if you have any suggestions...) I first saw her when I ...

your a great drawer! i can only draw 1/500 as good you i loved the tiger the best! love them!!!!! :)

I really like all of the photos the 1st one was the best it shows the different colors and i like how the light shines through the leaves. Keep up ...

The poem was so cute! The flow of it was a bit choppy but then again you'd have to be a super writer to make a long sock poem totally ...

I liked it so much! I liked how you left the story off like that so the readers can think of how the story should end.

This story seems a bit cluttered to me. I mean that you needed a bit more space. Deelish wrote: Madam Matilda's Orphanage. Cold-hearted Madam Matilda would always remind Tally of ...

This is good! :) I don't know much about limericks but this made me smile. Tenyo nitpicked the only mistakes I could find so... Keep a writin'! P.S. How'd you ...

WELCOME TO OUR LITTLE WRITERS CORNER!!!! Honestly I wasn't going to review this piece ( long pieces can be hard to review) but ya' got me at the first sentance! ...

* I figure we needed a suspense mark to get us going so here's my try...* SABRINA One hand on the steering wheel, I lazily tilted backwards. I had absolutely ...

No this wasn't a science paper ( I'd get A good grade, tho!). I was just watching the leafs and it struck me! Anyway yeah I guess you could call ...

Aw! This is cute in a messed up Draco Malfoy kind of way. I think you hit it right on the nob! the beggining is pretty unclear though. Did you ...

You are GOOOOOOD. Well, I don't have much else to say... but I think they were nice!