Sunshine

Yeah, this is great! Thanks so much!

Thanks! This is very helpful. I am a musician, so the terms aren't unfamiliar to me.

The topic is the important part, to me. I can make edits. Anyway, thank you for the help!

Thank you! These nitpicks are really important, especially the euphony one, so thanks a lot!

No, it's okay. I was just really surprised. Not a lot of people do that.

Sorry, I originally wrote the flashback scenes as 'you' and changed them for some reason. I must have missed some. Thank you for reviewing!

Glad to help! :)

Ohmygoodness, I literally wrote this four years ago. I swear, my writing has improved since then. XD This was the first thing I posted here, I think. Thanks for taking ...

The lack of capitalization is completely intentional. Thanks for taking the time to comment, but is there anything you think I can fix? Any way I can make the meaning ...

Thank you for the review! Very helpful!

Very helpful in the editing process. Thank you. I liked the Sunshine thing too- I kind of want to break into 'Maggie' when I see your name! Haha. :)

Thank you! The {one hundred something} lines were indicating weight loss as the poem went on. I figured that may be confusing. Thanks for the review!

This is my first review since the new YWS came about (Yes, sad I know), and I can't say I like the set-up. :p Either way, your writing does make ...

Oh wow, it's been a while since I've checked these and I have a bunch more reviews! Ok time for a double thank you! I appreciate all the >helpful< reviews! ...

Thanks Dudette! I appreciate your help! I actually never used to have tense problems until my teacher taught a lesson on them. Ironic right? ;) Anyway, all fixed.