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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Lesson to Learn

    Hello, it's me here with a review! First off, for being only one ryhme, this actually ends up having a decent flow to it, which really surprised me! I really ...

    Jan 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Aderyn: Prologue

    Hello, it's me here, and I'm gonna review this! This is a very nice prologue that helps to set the scene for what could be a very interesting story. I ...

    Jan 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: A Chance to Fly, A Chance to Fall - Chapter One

    Allo there! It's me... And, I'm going to, uh, review this and stuff. So, here we go! Okay so before I say anything else, I just want to point out ...

    Dec 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Review, Teen Fiction Re: Fortissimo: Chapter Two (part one)

    Hello, it's me again, here to a review another fabulous part of Fortissimo! Let me start off by saying that the falling asleep with the trumpet scene was very cute, ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Fortissimo: Chapter One (part two)

    Hello, it's me again, back to review part II! (Because why not use roman numerals?) As I said in the first part, you've done a wonderful job showing us Alexandra's ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Gift with a Curse

    Hello! it's a me, and I'm going to review this work! Let's a go! Overall, this was a very nice work. I had a good flow to it, which I ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Fortissimo: Chapter One (part one)

    Hello there Snazzy, ol' chap! It's an honour to review another one of your works! Overall, this is so far a wonderful story. You've done an amazing job at showing ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Anxiety

    This was a pretty good poem! I really loved how relateable this was. Anxeity is a pretty common thing for me (Although I wish it weren't). Anyways, on to actual ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Atlantic Emerald

    Wow! This was pretty dang good, and one of the best I've seen from the Green Room in a while. The title itself is very interesting, and inspired me to ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: Down In The Design Dumps

    Hello! This was a pretty nice story. You gave a very a good description of how Jenna was feeling, and the way she acted during the video call seemed very ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Music is More

    Hey there Snaz! Once again, another fabulous poem from you! However, I did find a few things that need fixing. "Music isn't just what I hope and dream, or just ...

    Jun 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Locked

    Hello OracleofGalaxies! This was a very touching and emotinal poem. I very much enjoyed the premise, and as someone who was previously given up on love, this poem was very ...

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: I Should've Listened

    Hello, KendraCardzoa! I felt that this was a pretty good story overall, and it had a interesting premise that enjoyed quite a bit. However, I did, unfortunatly, discover a few ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Colorblind

    This was a very wonderful poem! I really loved the deep yet simple meaning of the poem. The poem had a very nice flow to it, which made it easier ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Wanted

    Hello Sunnyanddinostomp! Overall, I found this to be a very good poem. I'm usually not a big poetry reader, but yours kept me intrigued. The rhyme scheme worked very well ...

    Jun 3, 2015


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