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Please review! Like I said, I have recently just gotten back from taking a short break from writing (about a few months), so I am a bit rusty. Also, I ...

Ok. Thank you for the explanation. Merry Christmas!

It's ok. You're fine. Just work on it in the future!

Don't be sorry!

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Thank you, @Horisun! Of course, you may call me whatever you'd like, I don't really mind. Anyway, I would like to inform you that I am exploring new rhythms, so ...

Hello again, @brookeallo! I realized after I reviewed you writing that I forgot to mention something: stanzas. To state the obvious, you did not separate your poem into stanzas. In ...

Hello again, @brookeallo! I realized after I reviewed you writing that I forgot to mention something: stanzas. To state the obvious, you did not separate your poem into stanzas. In ...

Thank you so much! May I help you understand a bit? The part "for some it's a great concern", I am specifically speaking of people who are stressed out from ...

Thanks for the review! It was very helpful. I will work on stronger words, a good ending, and capitalization. I will check out some of you literary pieces as well! ...

Yes, I know this is a very bad poem. It's very sappy and weird, but I haven't gotten a lot of practice lately. I haven't written for months, mainly because ...

I'm sorry you did not enjoy this poem that much. What can I do to get better? Any suggestions?

I'm sorry you did not enjoy this poem that much. What can I do to get better? Any suggestions?

See? What did I tell you? Look on the Literary Spotlight!

This is such a nice poem, @FireSpyGirl! I have a cat as well, and I love waking up in such a nice setting. You really describe this very, very clearly. ...