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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Short story fantasy beginning

    I would tend to agree with most of the other reviews. It would read well if the more uneccessary of those complex words were replaced. The use of polyllabic words ...

    Apr 23, 2009


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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