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Re: The Year of the Scorpio - Chapter 4
That's exactly what I said, every single comma.
May 31, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 5)
I just looked back and it would seem that the italics from the original that I typed didn't show up here. I shall work on that.
May 28, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 5)
Yeah, I tend to forget some pretty important details when writing. I shall definitely go back and fix those :)
May 27, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 4)
Thanks, I'll go back and try to clear things up as much as I can! :D
May 27, 2013 -
Re: Little Red Riding Hood ~A Children's Story?~
Okay, so this whole thing was really wonderful and I agree with you completely. There were some parts that I had to stop because the flow didn't sound... flowy, but ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Dance of the Lone Spirit (alternate ending)
Actually to get more physical description of the girl you can check out the other piece I wrote, this is just the alternate ending. I must also thank you for ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 4)
I shall do my best to remember as well! Glad you liked it, I have gone back and changed a couple things in the previous chapters so you can check ...
May 16, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 2)
I'll work on changing the names, sadly I always end up rhyming with other words. My skills on naming could use a lot of sharpening, will ask around for some ...
May 14, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 2.5)
I shall definitely work on clearing things up, I think I might take a plot writing break and start on editing now. Your points are very valid, never really noticed. ...
May 14, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 4)
Sorry, I didn't really know of a good way to say that, mind blank. I'll fix that to nightmares sometime soon, make things less muddier, maybe...
May 9, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 3)
I think that I shall take more time to explain the situation further. I tend to skip around when I think too so I don't realize when I sound confusing, ...
May 9, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (Chapter 1)
I'll try, sadly that isn't my strong point. Whenever I type I feel a little awkward, I shall work to become more comfortable.
May 9, 2013 -
Re: Do You Remember? (prologue)
Well the main reason that I decided to write this was because of a really sad feeling, not because the plot came to me. So in a way this is ...
May 9, 2013 -
Re: Dance of the Lone Spirit (alternate ending)
I would rip myself apart if I combined the endings, I was going to but then I found myself needing a good stitching. The name says what it truly is, ...
May 1, 2013 -
Re: Chapter two of the Lost Legend - The Durwings Chaos
Oh, yeah I've been wondering how people do that for a while now, keep forgetting to ask. Would you mind telling me on my wall or something? Thanks!
Apr 30, 2013