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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Free

    This makes me so relaxed! I really want to go to a meadow now! That was really good. I liked your vocabulary. I don't really write poetry but I love ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Happy vs Strong

    That was good. It leaves me contemplating on all the questions in your writing. I just really love how you added the questions. I think my favorite line has to ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Wedding

    MY GOSH!!!!!!! That ending was mind blowing! I cant believe it ended like that! I'm glad she doesn't have to deal with falling in love because every thing that falls ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Awe

    Very good. Everything about it leaves me wanting more to read. I really want to know more about Okami and Suzie and "I". It was very well written and seemed ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Like A Dream

    That was really good! But now I'm hungry.... haha... Anyway I love the whole concept of being love. Do you ever feel that we are all in love with the ...

    Jun 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 3: Leave Me Alone (I'm Lonely)

    If that was made into a full book I would read it 10 thousand times! Jeez, that was amazing everything about it was really good. Just after reading the first ...

    Jun 25, 2014


To gain your own voice, you have to forget about having it heard.
— Allen Ginsberg