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Sadly - Im one of the sad acts that researched and read every article I could get my hands on. The task was daunting.

Thanks for the comments, more are welcome.

Nice.

I told Tim about this at the time but he wasnt writing then, maybe this year tim?

Ok, Im going to end this here. Twilight - No one is being a jerk about anything, me and Scribe are having a debate about his work. My main issue ...

1 Leafy sat in a stolen ship on the edges of space. He was no where in particular, just sulking in the darkness; still on a high from pills of ...

Ok, wipe my comment from the face of the earth earlier. I read this fully and got into the present tense. I love the concept of this, the revival from ...

this is a much more powerful redraft. The poem now works and can be understood.

Thank you Claudette for your insightful points.

Ok, number one I really don't give a damn about whether you agree or disagree. Those are my opinions about your story, you can CHOOSE whether to put them into ...

He’s out now, but still He’s trapped inside his head It was an accident, but how Can he be forgiven? Im not sure if this makes sense. Its a little ...

Yes, this seemed to be the result of a passing thought. I agree with Snoink - I don't think Babies are ugly either so the whole poem seems irrelevant.

Yeah, that is an interesting point. The stars we see at night could be dead because it takes a while for light to reach us.

Oh right, I see now, I was getting confused with rates of change but this is actually something different. We are covering Integration in a few weeks. !!! - My ...

HI there, feel free to PM me with any questions or problems. Also, just a quick reminder - you may want to review a few pieces of work before you ...