Swottielottie

I love this poem it was really sad but cool at the same time Can u review my poem? its on the same section as this but uder is this ...

Thanks for the comments guys how is this version? I hope this is a little better Lilly white skin Dripping with blood Unmoving muscles Still as the dead one last ...

Lilly white skin Dripping with blood Unmoving muscles Still as the dead three hacks to the head axe on the floor An empty shell left behind on earth Memories faded, ...