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Syte

  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: Aliens!

    It seems very lighthearted. Probably could make a good children's book, from what I read. But they're right, it is cliched. Find a way to twist the cliches. The cliches ...

    Jul 14, 2008
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Rise of the Resistance (chapter one revised)

    I'd continue writing if I were you. Robots VS Humans is nothing new, but you it may possible to make the story interesting without overusing cliches. I don't know all ...

    Jul 13, 2008


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