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  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story

    your welcome

    Aug 27, 2018
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story

    The story is awesome and I loved it, the only thing that I can say is that in the beginning, the dream part didn't really flow well into the rest ...

    Aug 23, 2018
  • Short Story » Lyrical, General Re: White Lily, Lily White - Short Story

    The story is awesome and I loved it, the only thing that I can say is that in the beginning, the dream part didn't really flow well into the rest ...

    Aug 23, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: One Naive Soul.

    To be honest, I'd say this is more of a poem than a short story but none the less it was absolutely amazing. Great job!!

    Aug 23, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Genders don’t matter anyway

    I love it, it is very enlighting and pretty

    Aug 17, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: One Year Later

    Can you help me make it better or appoint maybe some websites that would help make this story better?

    Aug 17, 2018


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites