TakeThatYouFiend

This was lovely, and it was very good at conveying feeling. Criticism first methinks, and that is that I don't like the line "Apologies do not mistakes undo", because it ...

Wow. This is brilliant, wish mine had been this good. One question; are you a time traveller? Only it isn't 2015. :-) This is, methinks, a brilliant character, and the ...

Greetings! First a small typo, in the fourth line you have written "beleif" rather than "belief". Remember the useful rule, I before E except after C, except unless it's not. ...

This poem is very nice, the imagery and word choice are probably your best strength, although the rhyming is a close second; I can't find any forced rhymes. However I ...

Beautiful. The stanzas work well rhythmicly, and also the pacing of the piece had no glitches that I could see. The suggestion for improvment I will give is that "Then ...

Hello again! Go blue! This was really nice, and I am certain that it is an original subject matter! :-) The thing that I really liked about this was the ...

This was a beautiful poem, and I think what I liked the most about it was the unique attitude that it had, simply marvelous. My favorite bit of imagery was ...

This poem's main strength is it's rhythm. It has a sort of nightmarish quality in the pitter-patter sounds, which I bbelieve is due in part to the effective short sentences. ...

So, your first poem? Wow. This was brilliant. If there was any deep meaning other than the face value story, I am afraid I missed it, but it was great ...

Greetings on this fine review day! This poem has a fine constant rhythm and general structure, due methinks in part to the rhyming, which was not forced anywhere. My single ...

There is only one word to describe this, and that is SPLENDIFEROUS! This is such a cheerful optimistic poem that it made me smile! :-) It is so true as ...

This is very easy to relate to! :-) O.k. first my favorite bit. This was undoubtedly the last two lines, because the idea of putting ideas hidden under a blank ...

Hello this fine review day! Good point no. 1: Huzzah! You rhymed! I always like it when poets take the trouble to rhyme, it greatly increases the sense of rhythm ...

I sense this to be a truly heartfelt message, and I am thankful I have a dog. Righty-ho, criticism first. This time, it is writing it in bold. There are ...

Hello again! A nice happy poem! :-) I will give you my criticism, while I still remember it. And that is punctuation. It is clear you are using it, but ...