TanazMasaba

*blushing* thank you so much for the advice (and the compliments) pls come back now and then to read this. I don't think I can continue if I don't have ...

God I'm so glad this chapter is not that lengthy like so many people's are, but don't you think it's getting a little rushed? Slow down there and express more ...

God I'm so glad this chapter is not that lengthy like so many people's are, but don't you think it's getting a little rushed? Slow down there and express more ...

oh and if you got time please see my work "Speak Now". I need good writers to help me correct my mistakes. Criticisms not accepted---criticisms WANTED!!!

Thanks so musch for your help and please do come by now and then!

oh and if you need any help just PM me

i wrote this almost a year ago for my little sister Titly.....and I know whoever is reading this can dedicate it to some one they love too

I like this its very creative.

mmmmmmmmm.......this was short yet really sweet and I liked it. Usually people makes their poems long when talking about romance and love but you kept it short and in control. ...

hey this is really really good! I like how the girl doesn't care about age differences and how she thinks her feelings are in control when it isn't. nice job ...

Thanks! this was inspired by stories of addicts who are trying to recover and keeps on failing. I have never been an addict myself but I wonder if this is ...

i agree with the story getting rushed and thanks for pointing the mistakes out, they're really helpful. I have read some of your works and wow you are really talented! ...