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Tanishka

"A writer is a world trapped in a person."

  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: To the man who lives in my closet...

    Hey ,here for a review. Amazing work , it literally binds the reader throughout . It is full of mystery and suspense. The last part of the story makes things ...

    Mar 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Hide

    Hey! Welcome to YWS . This is Theia here for a review. Amazing work , I have to say . In a really long time , I haven't read anything ...

    Mar 29, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Desire

    Hi, Their here for a review. First thing-THIS IS AMAZING. I have never read a similar piece. Personally, I am horrible at writing stories, like totally horrible. I wish to ...

    Mar 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, Horror Re: I want blood

    Hi , Theia here. First up - this was an amazing poem. I have never, ever, EVER seen anything like this before. "I want blood" , it is really unique. ...

    Mar 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: The Far Stars

    Hey ! First of all congratulations on this amazing piece of yours. Personally, I am an astrophilic so obviously my love for the stars attracted me towards the title , ...

    Oct 28, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: tell me.

    This is a very powerful work and it is presents something like a story but I don't think it can be considered a balled. The poem is great and the ...

    Apr 27, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Never Grow up

    Hey Bellarke .... Here for a review(after a long time)and I have to say it is a very sweet poem.T he best thing is that I can totally feel it ...

    Apr 25, 2019
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Poetry

    Hey Caryst here for a review. Poetry , the title at once attracted me ,as if calling out to read the poem.I think this is a great poem.Word choice is ...

    Mar 18, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: they told me (they never told me)

    Hey Blueafrica , it is Theia here for a review. "They told me "they never told me ,the name struck me pretty hard.The poem is AWESOME,you have done an amazing ...

    Mar 17, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: four, cold slate

    Hey fraey,here for review. This is a great poem and meaning of the poem is amazing.The structure is pretty good.The first 2 lines "These rainbows speak my name, But rarely ...

    Mar 11, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: stripes on my mind

    Hey there! Nice work.I couldn't even imagine that someone would write something like this about a bee.The way you have presented the poem is also impressive,yellow and black. The second ...

    Mar 11, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Tunnel

    Hey Althea,here for a review. Nice poem ,I got to say,the theme you choose to publicise how life is,it is absolutely perfect,"To stop would be permanent " amazing. One thing ...

    Mar 10, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Self Protection

    Self protection,got to say, it's a good one.The description you gave is pretty catchy and the starting and ending lines just give a very nice effect. I think you could ...

    Mar 4, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Oh Bother

    Hey! Here for a review.A nice poem and nice work with rhyme scheme.I think you could change the punctuation, so many comas make it feel a little one line there ...

    Mar 3, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: contentment

    Hi manilla,here for a review. The poem ,as it is a good one.The imagery that the poem provides is subtle and concise.The structure in which the poem has been written ...

    Mar 3, 2019


Poetry lies its way to the truth.
— John Ciardi