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Re: The Wolf Girl
That was great, I really liked it. I didn't find any spelling errors. I'm not quite sure, but you might want to either put probably after they, or put a ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Doomed Men
Hi, Good job! I didn't find any spelling errors but when you repeated yourself you used a comma then a capital. Also, I'm not sure if you should repeat yourself. ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: What path to take? Part 1
Really great! I liked it a lot. Although I did find one error. It should be "The stupid things were everywhere" The stupid things were everything, darting between the trees ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Determination
Cool! Nice drawing, I love horses. ~Tayla
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Reminiscence
“Ugh, where is it?! I need that paper for my assignment tomorrow!” Emma groaned in frustration, throwing clothes from a pile on the floor of her disheveled room. She took ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Leia's Gift (Maybe Part One)
I liked the story but there were some errors. I would suggest going over it and watching mainly for punctuation, you were missing some capitals and a few comma's. I ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: In the Beginning
Great job! I like the way it's written, but their are a few errors: With is guidance, the earth, being both male and female, was able to bring forth life ...
Jul 13, 2009