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Re: untitled- this piece needs critique! very badly!
It wasn't horrable just hard to understand. It was difficult to understand what your story was about. I really had no clue into what is going on. Other than that ...
Jan 11, 2010
It wasn't horrable just hard to understand. It was difficult to understand what your story was about. I really had no clue into what is going on. Other than that ...
Jan 11, 2010
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