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Re: One Night Only
There are a few followers to the first poem; here's the next. Confusion, Runs around my head, Holds me hostage, Won't give up the Relentless stream of different dreams Like ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Redemption (Is in a Smile)
Really like this. The poem has a great, upbeat rhythm that comes out in reading it out loud. Uplifting, short and sweet. I like! :D
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: One Night Only
Hey, thanks for commenting! Yeh, the no punctuaion thing seems a bit wierd at first, but it's to highlight the rushed, frantic feelings of the narrator. Glad you enjoyed it!
Jul 7, 2010 -
Re: Strawberry Liquorice Laces
Gorgeous, Flit, I utterly love this. The use of the colours, and the elaborate yet simple descriptions means it plays out in my head as a short film. Definitely a ...
Jul 6, 2010 -
Re: One Night Stand
Hey, I really liked this. In fact, this is a useless post, I don't have any crits. Just wanted to say that I thought you'd captured the mood of this ...
Jul 6, 2010