Teddybear

I will start by saying, the problem is not your story, but then again, the problem is hardly ever the story. Your character is stiff, unrelatable. He sounds too stiff, ...

I don't consider your input rude, but then again, that's one of the things I just don't sense as well as other people, or at all (I really only know ...

Thanks for your help, I'm writing this on a google doc, and I have someone else helping out, but a fresh pair of eyes never hurt. And, just so you ...

So, I realize that I may not be the best person to criticise your work, as I myself am only a beginner in the writing field, but I have been ...