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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: On with the story (The Ringly's ch. 2 pt.1/2)

    I'm glad you like it so far!

    Apr 25, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: I am not a monster (pt. 2/2)

    Thanks! (I'm not the best with spelling and grammar, so thanks for pointing those things out for me).

    Apr 25, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: I am not a monster (pt. 1/2)

    Thanks! Yeah, the tense thing would probably be because I started writing this as a first-person story, which works best, at least for me, in the present tense, but I ...

    Apr 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Beautiful Things

    Thanks!

    Apr 19, 2019
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: At The End

    I've never heard Ryan used as a feminine name before, weird. Maybe I spend a little too much time looking into symbolic names and thematically appropriate names rather than just...names. ...

    Apr 16, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: I am not a monster (pt. 2/2)

    Thanks for the review!

    Apr 15, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Beautiful Things

    Thanks! I'll keep this in mind in future works.

    Apr 7, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: TheFactsOfLife (The Ringly's ch.3)

    Thanks! I'll refer back to this when I edit this chapter and I'll keep you posted about updates.

    Apr 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: On with the story (The Ringly's ch. 2 pt.2/2)

    Thanks!

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: On with the story (The Ringly's ch. 2 pt.2/2)

    Thanks for the review. I know that you want to know how the hack went, but believe me, there's a reason it's not included. Just wait, dear friend, just wait.

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: I am cold. My life is dull. My room is dark.

    Thanks for the review, I'll keep all of this in mind for future works.

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: On with the story (The Ringly's ch. 2 pt.1/2)

    Thanks for the review, I wasn't really sure about that one line either so I'll go back an try to re-work it.

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: I am not a monster (pt. 1/2)

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. The "I am not a monster" parts were actually italicized in the original version, I don't' know why it didn't carry over. I'll have ...

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Another life

    Thanks! (Djin is another name for a gene, like, three wishes and whatnot)

    Apr 1, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The simple man

    Thanks!

    Mar 31, 2019


Everything has to be taken on trust; truth is only that which is taken to be true. It's the currency of living. There may be nothing behind it, but it doesn't make any difference so long as it is honoured. One acts on assumptions. What do you assume?
— Player (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)