TenOfSwords

Wow, I love the formatting! And honestly I can relate to this poem quite a bit. I can feel the regret and the nostalgia. I love the personification of "Mr.Distance", ...

I love the different devices used in this piece. "dotted with darling Daises-" The alliteration here is very eye catching, I see a lot of instances of alliteration here, but ...

This... is so relatable. The title was so powerful, and an instant click. I feel like you captured that emotion that so many people go through and fed that feeling ...