Terrwyn

YES! Powerful, intriguing, and a definite emotion conveyed. I admired the strong message you sent with this. This piece is truly a gem, Crysi, and I hope to see more ...

The message is beautiful, but I didn't really pick up a strong feeling or emotion from this. It's not to say I don't like it, I do, but I do ...

(Is anyone else noticing Green Day stuff in here? Maybe I'm just psycho...) Overall, a beautiful piece of work, despite the clichés. Even though there were quite a few of ...

This was very well-written and poignant. The line about the "fish scale promises" seems almost funny, but beautiful at the same time. This poem conveyed an almost dreamy, sweet desire ...

This was absolutely lovely, though I do agree that it could have used a tad more imagery. You conveyed emotion in this very eloquently. Cookies and fire-breathing ponies to you ...