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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: I drank the potion

    really creative!!! i love the story, however i felt a little lost, not sure why but i did. the part at the end about the eye lash and the tears ...

    Jan 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Swimming

    I struggle with depression so I can relate to this on so many levels. It is beautifully write and the metaphors and similes are gorgeous. I felt a little bit ...

    Jan 14, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: Early Morning Forest

    This is gergus. I felt like i was there due to the imagery. I hope to see more of your work. This is absolutely beautiful. The "the morning sky bleeds ...

    Jan 14, 2018
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: A Letter to Life

    This is amazing. I love all the different characters, and the part about time. The message was interesting, and I was hooked from the beginning. I also thought it was ...

    Jan 14, 2018


Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality