TexanWriter

Negatives: A cool story, although one thing did confuse me: A forth one stitched the baby up and then handed him off to the man near the slime and he ...

This is amazing, and I only found one typo: “Is that all?” I gasped, leaning back in my chair to breathe a sigh of relief. So it wasn’t her teachers, ...

Hey, asxz! I think this was very well written, in fact beautifully, although a few questions DID come to mind: ~What was he a captive of? ~Who were the men? ...

I really enjoyed this except for one part: I feel his hand brush my cheek, I feel him coming closer, his nose grazing mine as he tilts his head to ...

Positives I found how you described the sights in paragraph one and smells in paragraph three were really well done! I loved Roberts sense of humor, and it interested me ...