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ThatAndalite

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: My Life is like a Map

    Interesting song, with quite the emotional meaning behind it. I have nothing harsh to say - and nothing to really improve it, either. Maybe a better rhyme scheme? I dunno. ...

    Jul 19, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: 30 Day Writing Challange.

    This is amazing! I'll be sure to complete it sometime, maybe starting now.. on my blog, maybe.. hm. But anyways, everything seems to be in tip-top shape with your grammar/spelling ...

    Jul 18, 2015
  • Poetry » Science, Romantic Re: O' Rapunzel, Where Art Thou?

    Love the chemical symbols in here! It took me a moment, but it made me laugh so hard once I realized what was going on. Overall, wonderful poem. Not that ...

    Jul 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Demon's Game: Arianna

    Hah, thank you! :3 Hell Hospital isn't really the whole game, though (TDG). It's a whole bunch of scenarios. Not just HH! So keep watching, I may add more.

    Jul 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'll be there.

    Beautiful overall. Love it.

    Jul 18, 2015


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind