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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Eden Part - I

    I think this is a good, strong poem. You instantly get an image in your head, and where it rhymes, it doesn't seemed forced. I really don't have enough experience ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: Flimsy

    Thank you!! I'll work on changing that :) It's kind of based off of a real story, but I can definitelysee how that would be unrealistic, I'll work on that ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pendulum

    Thanks, to both of you! I adore criticism. My friends always pull the lazy "Ohh, I like it!" move so they don't have to proofread or insult me, and my ...

    Nov 19, 2011


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